Friday 14 June 2019

persuasive writing

my persuasive writing


Wait wait wait teachers just because this writing is especially for you.

Hi here are my reasons why I think kids should be allowed to play fortnite at interval.

my first reason is it's a great game for kids that don't like sport. unsported kids can have a time of fun and it's a great game for peace and quiet

my second reason do the Mahi get treats. do the Mahi well and finish it then you can play fortnite interval.

my third reason and final reason is it's safer than rough games outside. your not going outside and getting injured and it will keeps you out of trouble from getting into fights all other bad things.

In conclusion I strongly agree that kids can play fortnite at interval.

2 comments:

  1. Kia ora Mitchell I'm Ruby-Rhain from Matawai school!
    What I extremely desire about this persuasive writing is how you've made it really unique. Despite the fact I'm not into gaming. But, having something a little different creates a taste of intriguing creativity. I also loved how you've added a few reasonable reasons why kids should play Fornite. And also, I have some questions. When did you start playing Fornite? Who do you mostly play with generally? And how long have you've been at Pompalier Catholic School?
    I would be very delighted to hear your reply. Kia Kite ano!
    Ruby-Rhain

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